All Comments on 'Helping My Girlfriend's Sister Ch. 02'

by mjt09

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Just a replay of Part I

Not worth the 15 seconds it took to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
pfft

Not exactly "constructive criticism" was that?

It was good. It <em>was</em> remarkably similar to part 1. But that's ok, they're figuring stuff out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice

Keep making more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Great start, but you could have combined chapter's one and two...and three? We shall see, but it's a great story. Looking forward to the chapter when Gabi engages!

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