All Comments on 'Helping Out Girlfriend's Sister'

Excellent. You have to do another chapter. This has a very good start.

So much potential, just wasted...

Good premise.

Nice scenario.

Needed more details.

Needed dialog about how his body, and his cock, balls, and ass felt to her.

Needed more details and dialog about how her ministrations felt to him.

Needed her asking him if he was enjoying what she did to him. Was there something else he'd like.

Needed involvement of/with her breasts.

Four stars.

Great story! Very erotic. Please keep writing as I like the dominance!

Wonder if the wife set this up on purpose. If not she's definitely a bitch for getting him worked up then rushing off when it would only have taken another like 30 seconds to get him off.

Got me going . Love it well written 👏