All Comments on 'Helpless - His First Time'

Mmmm, enjoyed that one!! Looking forward to his turn too.

SV

A very enjoyable story. It is always encouraging to find a well-written story in which a woman is dominant but is not a stereotypical dominatrix. Loved how you used the gentle D/s play to push them to an intensely erotic expereience. Nice writing.

More like outraged. Did he hit her more than once before he left, never to return?

That is the story of my dreams - I would just love to submit to a beautiful woman in such a way - do you have more similar stories???

I would if you asked/told me to. We've only used a blindfold sparingly it does add something to the experience.

To be beneath you, under your command and at your mercy is exactly where I want to be. Please, please take me and use me to your delight.

Ticklishsoles

Miss Riley,

I loved this ! I really enjoy the playfulness and affection between the 2 characters

Thanks for writing this

Lively premise.

The present tense is a bit off-putting, though.

Needed more in the way of teasing/preliminaries. Surely, her breats would have been of interest to him. But nothing. Nothing?

Ending pretty much ruined it. Just taking turns, with her not being a 'real' domme, and him just playing at being a sub was a turnoff.

Four stars.

At least they had agreed a safe word, unlike so many stories on this site.