by Limnophile
This is a great story so far! I just wish that it was longer. But, please keep up the great writing.
I'm glad at least some people enjoy this story. I write on the rare days when I have time. If you would like to read 100 pages in one sitting, check back in a few years. LOL
This reminds me a bit of the LN format, where each part is a small, independent chapter, with it owing more to the old serial publishing format than the modern one.
It's fine. I´m enjoying the story and hope you continue enjoying to make it!