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Anonymousabout 2 years agoNice first effort, but I'd suggest an editor, or proofreader for things like this: "I look pale" she said."
She's telling her son that he looked pale, so it should have read, "You look pale", not "I". There were more, but no sense belaboring it. Thanks for your work.
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Calirin@CalirinI’ve read many stories on Literotica and I’ve always wanted to give it a try. Hope you like it and please let me know what you think! I am always looking for ideas, therefore feel free to send me any ideas. I often look for images that inspire my characters, if you have anyt...
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