All Comments on 'Her Best Friend's Son Ch. 03'

Beautifully bringing everything together. Peeing at the end opens everything up.

Like how the story is progressing, how about some deep dive into the world of submission! keep going

I was impressed with Angela's sense of purpose and lack of shame. Unfortunately spoilt by the childish peeing at the end.

You did a very good job on this - much better when the ultimate risk is involved. You should have tagged this as "pregnancy risk".

You had me until the peeing. You went from a 4 star review to 2 stars with that. Just not my thing. A forward at the beginning of the chapter noting that this chapter will contain peeing would have been appreciated.

I hope this doesnt turn into a watersports story. This chapter was excellent until then.

dead end into gross,

stick to your claimed area of interest.