All Comments on 'Her Biggest Fans Pt. 01'

You got some work to do, but not too shabby. Continue...

So far so good. A drop directly into the shit storm. This could be a real banging story.

Good start. Too short

Hell of a place to stop. I like where it is going though.

MORE,MORE,MORE !!!!

too short at least have the brother get off or somethin

The start of what could have easily been a 5 star story. But it lost two points for being a one page quick tease just like the Protagonist of the story. Cutting it off in the middle of the story is not a cliffhanger/hook that will keep the audience interested. It feels like you're too lazy to plot out your own story. 😴 I gave you a 3/5 and even that feels like more than it deserves.