All Comments on 'Her Brother’s Best Friend Ch. 03'

I want longer chapters. I was so getting into it just for it to end.... uuughhh!! More. I want more!!!

Now THAT is a cliff hanger!

Thought I was not going to like Finn. Because virgin or not unless a woman expressly tells you to just bag it in hard you DON'T do it!

Only a selfish bastard treats ant woman like that! But given his age and relative paucity of experience I will cut him some slack!

Now I am rooting for them both.

What there is here in Chapter 3 is very good, but the entire chapter is much too brief, from the introduction to the character development to the plot, and especially to the very brief love scene.

Could be longer, but that is a damn good point to stop to move people on to the next chapter.

"He flattened his tongue and ran it from her asshole to her clit and back again." Hello, UTI.