All Comments on 'Her First Time'

Poor beginning, poor ending. Surprising from a big shot author like you.

You know there wasn't much chacter development her husband could have been a Vet. and she just really never knew him. Now ain't that just to fuckn bad. I understand that a jumper cable touched to the clit and a big toe can make a VC woman sing in any language that she has ever heard. A R.O.K told me that.

How many women share a bed with a veteran of the gulf war or some dust up where they were sent by the government to settle some dispute that never made the news. How many of them had to pull the trigger. Their wives ignore the fact. Some don't cheat but just really like to push buttons to see how far they can push things, and when the damn burst they wonder why. Or the family does.

@Olefisherman - I interpreted that completely differently than you did. You read it as implying that he's a veteran; I read it as implying that he successfully got away with murder at least once before.

Yeah he murdered once before. The man cheating with his wife. 🤦‍♂️

A very good ending!

Good riddance. If only all cheaters could be punished like this. Maybe some day.