All Comments on 'Her Green Gown Ch. 01'

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liqueurliqueur12 months ago

Very curious writing. I don't quite know what to make of it. It's as if it were risen in a different language, and then run through crude translation software. The result is writing that is sometimes as clunky as a broken transmission, and at other moments is utterly poetic. In spite of it's strangeness, it is undeniably imbued with an intense eroticism.

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Sights set on aerospace engineering. I like adopting new things whether it be the gym, games, enrichment classes at my college, or writing as I am right now. Regarding my writing, I'm new to it all, and the brunt of my knowledge and abilities are based on the skills I've lear...