by le124
2 feet long...acceptable.
Almost 1 foot circumference...no chance.
That means it's as big around as a dinner plate.
You lost suspension of disbelief right there. I couldnt read any further. It's more like really bad hentai.
The rest of your story may be good, may be bad, may be tolerable, or may be one of the best stories ever written on this site. I will never know. As I said, suspension of disbelief was broken so badly I cannot, nor will I ever give this story a chance.
Not saying that to be mean, or a troll. Your story title wasn't great, but the synopsis caught my attention enough to make me click. Your writing was good quality up until that line.
Circumference isn't diameter. A dick with a full foot of circumferance would be around 4 inches thick, and people get fisted all the time.
Outside of a girl having a penis, and the unlikeliness that any penis would be that large, its ability to fit is actually above board for the asshole. Even for length, as I've seen people put over 20 inches of dildo into a trained asshole.
Vagina you could only get so far into, but again fisting exists. Mouth is a stretch without dislocation, but under these circumstances the handling was well done. I don't even care about realism in stories, and yet even in an openly crazy scenario care was taken.
Furthermore the writing and sex scenes were quality as well. Please offer valid criticism next time
As impossible as this is, it’s pretty hot. I wouldn’t mind more of this.
Personally, i don't care when a story has impossible or unrealistic anatomy, in fact, that is precisely why i read it in the first place. That is the reason for people to read and write hyper. Even if you don't update this story never i hope you keep writing.
-S
Definitely looking forward to round 2.
Hopefully more cum being shot all the way through Jane, exploding out of her nose & mouth.
Some more high-effort deepthroating would be amazing too.
I will read this eventually. I first read the comments now. Interesting how some people are caught up on these common futanari measurements. One guy says 1 foot circumference is unrealistic. I had to google it but it means around 4 inch diameter or thickness. Almost thin. But fair. In general stories are not that specific about thickness, just say it is as thick as a big soda bottle, or use diameter to describe how thick it is. Circumference is not common in the field of dick thickness measurement. I will check out now this story.
I liked this story. I get the whole thing about Futas having big cocks. But for me personally 12-13 inch would've been big enough and more believable.