by slvjenn
Yes, I love the detail. The way you describe emotions is fantastic. I can hardly wait for the next installment. Pleae get rid of Doug, though -- he's a pig who doesn't deserve to have you has his slave.
Please write more your stories are the best I have read so far. I am dripping from the way you describe everything it's as if I'm in the moment.
Excellent story! The details of the physical and emotional aspects of your experience was SO real...and hot. I'd love to read the next installment!
What a story. I love it. Please write the next installment, please
this is a really hot start to a story! I am really looking forward to the next chapter! Andrew's club should not be involved for at least one more story!
Wasn't sure at the beginning of the story (ch01), but the surprised ending was wonderful. Really enjoyed it.
The story is pretty well-written, and I liked aspects of it. It should work well as a guide for the type of dominants subs should avoid too. Both are dreadful with no idea of what they are doing really other than in a couple of areas.