All Comments on 'Her Legacy'

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MaonaighMaonaigh12 months ago

A nicely erotic read and I loved the twist at the end. It's the kind of short story which is a pleasure to read and I'm sure it must have been fun to write. Five stars all round.

DessertmanDessertman12 months ago

It doesn't pay to be dishonest!

A nice story, well told.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Sorry to say this, but the ending was so old and predictable ((in fact it’s the punchline to an old joke), that it really spoiled an otherwise good piece of writing.

OralinatorOralinator12 months ago

What a burn. Well played

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

excellent... if i were younger,, i might try hiking again

roveroneroverone3 months ago

always had an interest/appreciation for older women, and yes, just like guys of course women have needs...

tho, such a disappointment- she's shaved rather than a proper adult woman's muff...

still cute story, tho thought it weird at time why he gave fake name...

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I write stories mostly for my pleasure with a plot-line and I prefer stories which have believable motivations. My main focus seems to be erotic horror, somewhat inspired by H.P. Lovecraft, but I do write in other categories, too. Yes, I know tentacle-monsters etc. aren't real...