All Comments on 'Her Name Was Celeste'

suggest you read 'Summer Job' by Wiccanshire and see how well written it was. It was published today as well and a few up from your so-called nonconsent/reluctanct story.

Get a gist of it and perhaps you will do better the next round instead of your heroine asking for more the moment the cock entered her pussy.

Disregard the commentor who was disappointed there wasn't any injury involved and keep up the good work.

I think honestly this is in the wrong catagory. Maybe it should be under Erotic Couplings or something, but not this one. The story was good, but not placed properly. For this genre of story, you expect a little more reluctance and a bit more aggression/force from him. Good none the less, just not suited properly.