All Comments on 'Her Pass'

Is this a re-post of an earlier work by u because if it's not it's stolen word for word from a story I read on here a few years ago.

The author stated quite clearly that this was a repost of an earlier story of his he'd taken down to publish as an e-nook, can't you read, or were you in too much of a rush to shove your hand down your pants?

Nor do you know your red from your white.

This is my first time reading this story - I'm really glad you decided to put this up again.

This story was an automatic 5 stars for me for two reasons:

1) The kissing. Most stories gloss over the kissing, and so I was pleasantly surprised to read about the heavy necking the mom and son engaged it. Kissing is IMO one of the most intimate exchanges between lovers, and that is only magnified when the two happen to be mom and son.

2) The ending. I had resigned myself to a 'sad' ending - that this would be a one time thing between the two and the mom would return to the cheating bastard. And then with just a couple of sentences, you left me with a huge grin on my face.

"I'm going to Jack's." Damn straight she is. And never coming back.

Thanks for writing (and reposting) this.

Jack:

This is one of your best works, thank you for reposting. You have a real talent for making a seemingly unreal situation very real and very believable, this is a real talent.

I look forward to more.

Again thank you for reposting.

One of the best stories I have read to date. :-)

Impressive. Really. One of the very best EVER on Literotica, and lately that's saying something. Thanks.

Is it too much to ask if there's gonna be a sequel?

Loved the story. It was quickly paced but not before you were able to develop your characters. Glad you reposted it.

Great writing and story development. Thanks for posting.

For the read.

Very interesting writing style! You wrote the emotional depth she was going through quite beautifully. Thank you for reposting and sharing your words with us. You have a deft hand and a unique style and voice.

I shall enjoy reading more of your work!

What strikes me most is Jack's attitude towards his mother Anne. He's the personification of bold young masculinity--self-assured, determined, in charge. On the bed he even manipulates her body, like a puppet. Anne responds to her boy with eager womanly submission, which he takes as his right. Jack fucks his mother, his plan all along and her unconscious desire. Anne suddenly wakes up to the fact that it's an unprotected cock that's plundering her depths, that her son intends to blow his young balls right up where she carried him for nine months, up the warm wet wonderful hole he came out of as a baby. She surrenders, "Go ahead then. ...Give it to me." and Jack splatters his semen all over the tender pink walls of his own mother's cunt. Here the ever-focused boy is marking his mother's vagina with his copious seed, claiming it as his and his alone, now and always. Inevitably, Anne leaves her worthless husband, Jack's dad, and cleaves to her one true love and one true lover, her own son.

A very arousing story with many possibilities. Hopefully, his Mom when she goes back to Jack's; will have him bang her really hard, so she can feel him very deep and touch places that never have been touched. She will confess that in high school she liked giving blowjobs and eating the cum...... many possibilities please keep going - thank you !!

I liked your story very much. A few grammatical errors interrupted the flow and your desire to avoid using names for sexual organs was cumbersome in places. Overall this was well written and certainly arousing. Well done.

This is by far your best work-- I am glad you reposted it.

I hope a sequel is coming.

I read and enjoy all of your work and can only hope you can handle the mean coments some see fit to post.

Just plain enjoyed the story.

What happens when she gets to jack's place? Will they live together as a couple? or does he move home and shack up with her after daddy pisses off to be with his tart?

A very well written story, love it! Thank you!

Very Nice, much, much improved. Pace, nuance and proper finishing of the scene.

Excellent!!!

Beautifully written with perfect segue. Especially liked the perfect amount of initial reluctance demonstrate by her . . . .