All Comments on 'Her Plan'

Title says it all.

There's 2 minutes of my life I'll never get back. What a waste of time/space.

On your anniversary? Non Erotic at best

It was interesting at least. Seemed like the couple enjoyed it. Keep writing.

Disgusting

she is a slut and whore and he is a pussy

and in a not very long time the husband will be a cuckold (who has no balls for allowing his wife to dictate). It is pretty obvious where this 20 year marriage is headed and also the dumb fuck husband who is going to let it happen.

Anyone who finds this anniversary present erotic is really dysfuncional and needs lots of counselling.

This is erotic? Do I need to say more?

But the cream pie. That's without appeal.

Except for the indirect injection system, this was clearly going to happen. Even the creampie could be seen cumming (hehe)! Pretty much a flash story, but not bad, even with the unwise health-risk creampie! Maybe the hotel requires routine STD screenings!??

4*

Next up Wife starts FUCKING other men and making hubby a clock sucking fag

The clinical approach was somehow worse than straight cuckoldry.

In a bad way.

I think she should fuck the guy the next time, since her husband knows that he can deal with her having sex with another man, and perhaps enjoy watching.

Thanks for the read.

She gave him his fantasy in an extraordinary way!!

Those damned foreighners should stay with their own language! 1* !!

These 1* comments look like the work of Dwormdick...

She's nuts and now he's a cuck. Good job author.

Yeah right.

...I guess you intended to entertain a majority, right? Even though I absolutely dislike cuckold stories (i.e. Authors writing about their own longings), - what I even dislike more is someone critisizing under the cover of "Anonymous". That´s poor.

You can do better for a story!

out scores the little head, TK U MLJ LV NV

" - what I even dislike more is someone critisizing under the cover of "Anonymous". That´s poor" said EgoTrixi.

Ok, I'm going out on a limb here, but I'm willing to bet your real name isn't EgoTrixi. So I looked at your profile page, just to make sure. The only detail listed is that you are over the age of 18, it doesn't list your sex or anything else of note, and of course, it does not have your real name anywhere. I suspect you don't cash your checks (assuming you work) in that name, nor receive bills that way, and I'm pretty sure your drivers license has a different name on it as well.

Here's hoping you now understand how abysmally stupid you are to make a comment about anonymity when all of us here are anonymous. Weapons-grade stupid, I might add.

Just awful. No character development, and this act was just strange. When something's this strange you need to explore why someone would like this, not enjoying your own seconds, but someone else's leavings.

So the big plan is to shove a strangers sperm into her cunt, no telling what kind of diseases, so the pussy whimp can fuck her and share the diseases and then the closet gay husband wants to suck up the stranger's cum too.

What a pathetic pair.

Just put him in frilly knickers and let him watch her fuck a busload of strangers so he can eat a massive cream pie.

That's next for the loser anyway. Now that she knows what a submissive pitiful cuck wannabe he is.

Now give her an anniversary gift, divorce papers.

the low score and only one favorite

I suppose they were made for each other? I sure don't want her.

Another sissy cuck and a slut story