All Comments on 'Her Queen'

Please more of it.

You wrote such a beautiful touching story. I loved it.

that shit crazy

I love this!!! In a short story, you impressively created growth for a character I didn’t think had it in her. Love your queen and version of a fairytale. Beautifully written.

Please write a part 2! Wonderful story! Loved it!

A really good first story, and a nice slow burn. It would be nice to see a sequel, or at least other stories not set in the current day as most writers' are.

One minor niggle is that Luciana is referred to as nobility several times. She's not, she's royalty instead.

Wonderful...consummate please!

One of the best stories I’ve read here, hope there’s a part two.

Part two

Part 2

We need freaking part 2😍😍

Really wonderful work, especially for a first effort.

Do you intend to continue and make a series out of it?

Hope you're doing well.

I loved this story. Thank you fur sharing it. I really enjoyed the fairy tale take on the story.

A fine idea.

I think the style is rather stilted - especially the dialogue. I think you think an antiquated / old-fashioned narrative style is required, but have great difficulty managing it.

I think these kind of stories are pagan or pre-christian, so words like 'sacred' or (especially) 'sinful' seem out of place.

Cool and witty idea though.

Lescivious,

You are a very good storyteller

I loved your story and thank for sharing.

I enjoyed the fairy tale, I hope there is another.

Thank you.

tedi

Wonderfully romantic fairy tale that surely cannot end as is. You craft fine storylines and create interesting characters. Am hoping you share more from your vivid imagination.

I was expecting more sadism and evil. Surely Adira would enjoy 'hurting' her wifey, while Luciana would merely beg for and adore some loving abuse. Pain given with love... simply perfection *blushes*. Now THAT would be the way to take the second part. Great story well told. x Laura

Beauty and the beast went lesbian and bdsm, well that was different.

I love this story.

50 shades of grey - Lesbian style.

A description of the strap-on scene would have been nice.

Please write a continual. I fell in love with your story and read it about every night. It melts my heart the love these two shared and the way you wrote it just touched me so. Thank you so much and hope you can write another. I loved the two characters so much and how you described them too. You are a talented writer. Keep up the great work!

Wow, this story was amazing! :d

An interesting tale but it needs better editing.

The language is quite stilted in places and there ate typos.

The hopeless romantic that I am kept me going and I was richly rewarded. Well done using tempered discipline.