All Comments on 'Her Rainy Afternoon in Paradise'

A fantastic story about losing your inhibitions and letting go for once in your life. I found myself wishing I was the one who could have shared the moment with you. I think I would have succumbed just as well.

I prefer this perspective...apart from anything else you get to see what Kurt whispered.

The problem with trying to write an account from two different perspectives, especially one being male and the other female, is creating two separate 'voices'. You used so many of the same descriptive expressions as in his version, the voice in my opinion, had not changed.

I confess, I haven't tried to do it in a long time. None of my efforts to do it are posted.

Keep writing though.