All Comments on 'Her Roommate Leaves & She Follows'

Better than the Odiouser version!

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I hope you are abducted by aliens and they anal probe the fuck out of you.

Of course, considering how far your head is up your own ass, you probably won’t feel it.

There, having established my contempt for your lack of writing ability, allow me to tell you how I really feel.

Your story sucked. She was drunk and he made her drive to her parents. Then after gaslighting her potential lover, he ruins her relationship for shits and giggles, then made lover boy drive drunk.

That bullshit is why you disappoint your parents and have no friends.

Thank you for your continuation of my story. It is an honor to be emulated by such a prolific writer. There is another one here in today's LW and one yesterday in Loving Wives, all of them of the BTB ilk. I am sure your commentators will be kind.

Wow absolutely brilliant no blows thrown yet the MC has totally destroyed and wrecked that silly woman’s and her would be lovers plans, by outsmarting and outthinking them.

Funny, haha. A++

Funny as anything and totally unbelievable. Ol' Whackdoodle continues to prove the adage "... or open your mouth and remove all doubt!"

Awww...... too cute. Well done.

All good…except….he joins the Marines???

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5 *****

Whackdoodle. Gee, I'd like to comment on one of your stories, but I can't because you haven't written any. Read the whole story, I never said anyone was drunk. and Dave tried to discourage Clark from driving away, and yea he destroyed their love. Big Whoop.

Funny twist, especially the BS he fed Clark about their sex life.

Turning Clark into some rich kid who had to work for the family business and agreeing to wait two years to contact Angie was too big of a change from the original characters.

Dave joining the Marines was definitely over the top and added nothing to the story.

Pretty decent follow-up to the original. It lacked a little depth in the epilogue, but them most writers on this site make that same mistake. Still, good prose and was mostly believable. 4*

That was a wonderful and novel ending to Odiousers initial premise! Loved it!

Nice story. Running off to join the Marines is a little dumb. So is just walking away from his shop. But the rest was fun.

Don't know why you waste your time responding to Whackdoodle. As you said, he's never written anything. Ignore him, maybe he'll just go away! : ) Nice ending by the way.

WHACKDOODLE

Oh my, what the fuck is wrong with you? Do you only read the first and last words of each paragraph and piece together a story from that? I am going to ask something foreign for you, think about what you said! "The husband ruined her relationship with the guy outside her marriage she wanted to fuck?" What kind of retarded thinking is that? Listen whack, get some help. You may have serious mental health problems.

Much like the horrid February Sucks story why would I want to read a follow-up to another cucky shit story?? Note I don't.

Bravo! Well done follow up.

Well written and creative story. The first of yours I've read. I wish it were longer and more detailed, also thanks for not using sex as a filler.

Wow! Some one took an Odiouser cuck story and turned it on it’s head. Very well done.

While just so-so for me, it still doesnt take much to improve on cum guzzling odoreater's fecal matter.

Pretty pathetic actually.

Once again, that tool whackdoodle spouts off and makes a complete fool of himself. It’s very clear he has some mental issues, so let’s not be too hard on him.

Fuck that, burn the bastard!

Not the way I imagined it, but creative, none the less.

Polynesia is a matriarchal culture.... so watch out!! Surgically precise, BTB!!

3 star recovery from a 0 star set up.

5 stars to writer, I liked the burn for both the wife and her lover. Very good. Not even any violenceike I would have done. I love a happy ending, good job and great story. ThankYou

Apparently shit CAN be turned into gold.

Looks like "Davie boy" wasn't the dumb wimp she thought he was...

5 🌟s

Fred

Whackdoodle

You are the Biggest Piece of Shit that ever logged on the internet...

There is No redeeming quality anywhere in you...

Big Bubba must have done a complete number on you while you were in prison, maybe you should think about going back there and Leave The Good People on here Alone!

Sub par as far as sequels go. On a high note, at least it was short.

Yep that worked for me

4/5

Better, but still weak. Great technique in dumping the deceitful bitch, but you never bothered with the most interesting aspect of the story: why Did she marry him? She could have easily snuck out west to meet her true love periodically, why did she even bother to get involved with another man? It appears both Clark and the husband dodged a cheating wife waiting to happen. Unless the dumb shit roommate hooks back up with her and she ends up cheating on him anyway. Several opportunities for continuing sequels. This one was a good start. Thanks for the effort.

What a great mindfuck.

Very succinct . Thank you

Nice clean efficient burn

Oh, she'll be a lifetime pig alright, I'd bet my left kidney on it!! lol

Straight up alchemy, took a turd and turned it into comedy gold.

5 stars

You're a great story teller

Boot camp then itr(infantry training regiment )

If you want to use all 30 days leave at once go for it. That's it for the year. After ITR then to whatever school for your MOS

5 stars.

Neat. Sweet. petite, Complete,