All Comments on 'Her Secret'

by liliths

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Puke!

Another willing cuckold story that's not even a story. Don't waste the 30 seconds it takes to read this crap, it's not worth the 30 seconds.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Damn That Was Short And Nasty****

Thanks for sharing. Pt. 02?

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Apple

Balls the size of apples! That's one for the books. Bet this guy old enough to be her grandson son was bowlegged. Best comedy stories this side of humor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Need a New Plan

@liliths this is your forth submission in four days. None has been a serious effort to write a story. Instead each has been an attempt to troll the Literotica audience This one is the most disturbing so far. It has an ugly, ominous feel to it.

Seems pretty clear something bad happened in your life recently. Using racist and cuckold stereotypes to rile up strangers on the internet is an interesting coping strategy but it doesn't seem to be working for you. You are getting worse not better. I wonder if you're drinking more than usual.

With all sincerity please get some help. It must be painful to live in this mindset. You don't have to.keep suffering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
When you find out someone is mowing your front yard

It is time to pave it and paint it green... I'm not paing some landscaper to do it for me.GMD?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Her grandsons son?

I guess if geriatric sex is your thing then go for it. Besides, at their age, they’ll probably both forget what had sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This one hits the sweet spot

Keep them cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not erotic

Good try in writing out of your normal language but tough to read.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 4 years ago
Does Grendelpuppy have a new screen Name?

Sure reads like his stuff

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 4 years ago
More garbage

He has health problems but that doesn’t mean he has to throw away his self respect.

clarkgarbleclarkgarbleover 4 years ago
Im gratified

Im gratified to see that semiliteracy is no impediment to posting on Literotica.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 4 years ago
I Was Gone With the First Sentence!

"My wife got fuck by a black guy old enough to be her grandson son."

Um, the guy is what, 18? So, grandson around 38, son around 58, she's around 78?!!

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusover 4 years ago
**

A story this short could be reread and edited in minutes. Otherwise nice concept.

KingBandorKingBandorover 4 years ago
Your opening line.

"My wife got fuck by a black guy old enough to be her grandson son. "

So, your wife is what? 80? 75? Having sex with someone barely legal?

Poor boy. Could he not get it from anyone 50 or under?

KB

hotprof1973hotprof1973over 4 years ago
More entitled porn

This reads like written by a woman trying to make excuses of being so entitled that jumping that lamest excuse to cheat on her husband. There’s little substance and the writing needs a lot of work: structure, grammar. Writing is the only way to improve, but you don’t need to keep submitting your first works - especially when you aren’t following the advice of getting an editor.

MightyHornyMightyHornyover 4 years ago
'Was about to write something...

... But gave up on it after reading what Anon behind "Need a New Plan" left here.

No way could I come up with a better comment.

A troll job indeed.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
RR

Gpup was and is a purveyor of the same racist garbage as liliths, but he is at least literate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Young cock for the neglected mature wife

I give it a 5 star. I too, am impotent due to prostate cancer, in my 70's, and am not able to satisfy my wife sexually. I would welcome her finding a young cock, even if it's a young BBC.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Your English is horrible.

You either need a good editor or someone to proof read your stories for you. Secondly you should stay out of the loving wives section. You always get low scores and your stories are simply awful.

1 star

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 4 years ago
1

Quite poor English skills, very unreadable. Swiss cheese plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
illiterate moresome

Welcome to the illiterate racist challenge! Which "author can demean the "manhood" of the protagonist, all while perpetrating a racist ideology in completely illogical forms of the English language. No monetary value will be awarded the winner, but said victor shall receive a level of disdain and ridicule among readers of any moral compass.

Apparently we have a new participant... "lilifth"

Smokepole

disgusted by idiots

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
And now for something different.

"YES I BECAME OLD, but I always thought that would be a good thing. The alternative was not attractive, having expended the energy and resources to survive the atrocities of life and the ravages of time. Yes in those few moments I felt I needed her. But after less than an hour had passer I realized that I needed love, caring, and respect. In the moment of that realization pain burned its way into my heart and seared my soul. I could not let this stand! That was the moment my plan was born to separate that black animal from his genitals and have her fucked by the mule in our pasture. Let she who live by the monstrous dick, die by it! Problem resolved!"

KristieBechirKristieBechirover 4 years ago
I couldn’t make it past the first sentence

Your wife got “fuck”? And the guy was “old enough to be her grandson son”?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another Bull shit story

There are very few real men who would have tolerated the cheating going on behind their back. The wife should have been confronted and possibly a good hard spanking, and the asshole who was fucking her should have had the shit kicked out of him for fucking his wife, when he least expected it, and a good kick to the balls hard and true which would have had admitted him to the hospital. Of course it would be done protecting their identity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Even 40 years later if I found my wife had an affair35 of those years ago I’d leave the slut. Divorce and heavy guilt trip for both to go to the graves with . He should go to the doc , get viagra find a hot hooker to fuck and rub it in the black cock lovers face. I’d also disgrace her with the hole family by getting pictures and video to share with all . He must be thinking how many years of Cum from others was she swallowing and sharing with him . . First I’d get all the pics and video than fuck with her head and hire a new landscaper, next move money around if there is any. Give it to the kids and grand kids. Divorce papers next with the simultaneous house up for sale while moving out. Than the release of proof to everyone we knew. The more tame ones first than slowly progressing to the more explicit. Hope embarrassment and shame will destroy her like she did him and the family

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Wow

I get canned for making some negative comments. Only read a few here and they make mine seem like glowing recommendations. At least I used my user name.

So, yes I only read a sentence before checking comments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The yellow panties.

She was wearing only yellow panties. That part reminded me of the time I caught my wife. At the time, she was 27, a slim pretty blonde with perfect C cup boobs. We were at a party and both had too much to drink. I wasn't feeling to well so I went out on the porch to lie down on a chaise lounge. I was right by a sliding glass door that led to a bedroom. The light in the bed room went on. The curtains were open about 10 inches so I could easily see the room. I saw my wife who went into the bathroom. When she came out, her boss had come into the room and was blocking her way to the door. He told her she had to pay a toll to get by her. He said she had to show him her panties. She told him "no way" but he kept insisting and they were laughing and flirting and finally she said, "OK, I'll show you my panties but that's it, nothing else." I had a real hard on at the thought of her showing her panties so I just lay there and watched. She pulled her dress above her waist and showed him her yellow nylon panties. He stepped forward, kissed her and started rubbing her pussy through the panties. I started to get up but everything started spinning and I had to lay back down. They kept kissing and he unzipped her dress and pulled it off her arms and push it to the floor. She wan't wearing a bra so she was now completely naked except for the yellow panties. I tried to get up again but felt like I was going to throw up so I lay back down. She told him she wasn't going to fuck him so he said, "OK, I understand, but you can't leave me like this so get on your knees and suck my cock." She told him "no" she'd never cheated on me and didn't want to. He pushed her to her knees in front of him. She said, "I'll suck your cock this one time but my husband can never find out." I then watched her take his cock into her mouth and enthusiastically start to blow him. She sucked his cock, licked his balls and let him cum in her mouth, something she had never done for me. Then she got dressed and went back to the party. Unfortunately, that wasn't the end of it. 45 minutes later they were back in the room. This time he stripped her completely naked, she sucked his cock a little and he threw her on the bed and fucked her good. They came back three more times and fucked. I was furious but, even so, the whole thing really turned me on. The next day, she confessed the whole thing to me. She was completely honest and told me he had cum in her mouth twice and her pussy four times. The next week, he called her into his office and forced her to strip naked. He then made her suck his dick then he bent her over the desk and fucked her. When she got home she told me what had happened. I went to see him and gave him a serious attitude adjustment! He never touched her again. I never wanted it to happen but we have had some great sex with her telling me about having his cock in her pussy and mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Ex Wives

That is where the Sluts Belong .. I wonder where all the good men and women are ? ..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

When the first sentence has a grammer error, it doesnt bode well. Also the math doesnt support the plot. Assuming everyone has their children at 18, that makes Granny 72 and on her knees. "Her grandsons son" Granny is 18, her son grows up and has her grandson at 18, and he has his kid at 18. Then 18 years later Granny is on her knees. 18+18+18+18=72. Actually you need to add 4 years to Granny unless everyone here actually gets pregnant at 17 and delivers at 18 otherwise its 19+19+19+19=76. Anyway. Not that many 75ish year-old woman are interested in blowing anyone. LOL I bet even at 18 he lasted a loooong time looking down on that thin white hair. I've read a few good Granny porn stories but this isnt one of them. And Granny is usually under sixty in those.

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Read the first paragraph, poor little boy can barely spell.

Now, since i didnt read past that marvelous opening, let me guess, he found his skank cheating on him oddly arousing and in turn did nothing.

By the numbers little dicky cuck story.

sf_operative63sf_operative63over 2 years ago

Need a proof reader and or editor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not me. He would be spending a lot time in the ICU at the local hospital. She be spending the rest of her life without having me.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Trash, not worthy of a comment. 1/1

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Wroter is total fuck worthless cuck.

Yeah what you wrote was about on par with that, sorry Harry Homo, but you cucks are a sorry little bunch o bitches.

WolfOfTheWorldWolfOfTheWorldover 1 year ago

You don't keep whores once you discover them. You cut then out, cauterize the wound and move on.

oldguy1oldguy1over 1 year ago

cuck rubbish bs justification, I still love her rubbish

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 1 year ago

What a stupid dumb husband... get some balls and walk in on them and let them know that you are smarter than they think..if you want to allow it then fine..just make them do it in front of you so you can watch

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