All Comments on 'Her Secret Life... Ch. 03'

The lack of, or the mis-use of punctuation makes the story difficult to follow.

You are just way to weird for me to read another of your stories. I mean you have an extremely bizarre way of looking at the world. Even the most mundane of your characters thoughts piss me off to no end. I can honestly say that I disagree with everything your characters do, think, decide and it makes it impossible to read your stories!

Another reminder as to why we need negative rating out here. Giving this story a 1 star rating would be praising it too much.

Your story would have come across a lot clearer with some outside help

just simply terrible then you look up and see people favored it how fucking sick is that.

Suggest you give it up 'cause you certainly have no talent.

It's over. Move on Mikoli you can do better.

Shallow and wooden dialogue. Very little emotion. Thanks for the offering.

I'm liking this!

I had a bad feeling at first, didn't think any good could come from ANY threesomes, let alone letting Joyce in, but so far things seem to be working out.

Please don't fuck them up!

This has o be author’s worst story ever.