All Comments on 'Her Service Charge'

Original and genuinely loving. Awesome work!

Good premise.

Nicely paced.

But needed more step-by-step details each time she edged him. And each time she had him bring her to an orgasm.

And when it got to his worshiping her ass, needed many more details, with him being instructed what to do.

Four stars.

Nicely done! I love well-written, believable dialogue. And I didn't see the twist coming, although on second reading the foreshadowing was ... still subtle, but discernible.

And, yeah, the line about "go home to your wife ... marked with my scent" -- that would have been the coup de grace for me, too.

I've been with an escort who did this for me, and more and it was awesome. A wonderful story, more, please?