by JessicaS
Hehe..only a few tears this time. ;) Actually, I thought you did an excellent job portraying thier in experience while exploring each other. Kind of reminded me of my first few fumbling attempts at sex, well done!
Thank you for your comment, I think their inexperience was a key point in this chapter.
I submitted the final third chapter for approval, it should be up within a week.
And seeing how unpopular my stories are so far, I think you might be one of my very few fans on literotica :).
It's not straight to the point, but gentle and loving.
A nice change from alot of the stories on this site, keep it up..
I really like the way they take their time in this one. Good job and keep up the good work!
You make the affections and concern between the sisters so beautiful. Thank you
"Like Christmas morning." That's a fantastic line. I wish I'd thought of it. Great job. I love your stories.