All Comments on 'Her Sister Ch. 02'

Simply lovely.

"Like Christmas morning." That's a fantastic line. I wish I'd thought of it. Great job. I love your stories.

You make the affections and concern between the sisters so beautiful. Thank you

I really like the way they take their time in this one. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you anonymous, I appreciate it :).

It's not straight to the point, but gentle and loving.

A nice change from alot of the stories on this site, keep it up..

Thank you for your comment, I think their inexperience was a key point in this chapter.

I submitted the final third chapter for approval, it should be up within a week.

And seeing how unpopular my stories are so far, I think you might be one of my very few fans on literotica :).

Hehe..only a few tears this time. ;) Actually, I thought you did an excellent job portraying thier in experience while exploring each other. Kind of reminded me of my first few fumbling attempts at sex, well done!