All Comments on 'Herman: Tomboys Grow Up'

Caprine

Just loved your story - superb balance of story telling and down right horn..... well done

It had everything for me. Could even have dropped into the Romance catergory as well. Thankyou for the read, enjoyed every moment.

Your story flowed well, was very erotic and well written- it compelled me to see what other submissions you've made- something I don't normally do.

Thank you!

p.s.- Please don't stop writing- you're very good!

Great little romance story, one that I myself would not of minded have happen to me. you built the characters well, they had some depth. The story flowed very well, which made me want to continue reading it.

Keep writing.

Your super story about the two people in the story and how things developed over time between them. I would love to see another chapter in the story to see how things can continue to develop between them. Keep up the good work

keep them coming

He missed her the first time--so sad. Now that they are back together, I'm sure there is more to the story. How about another chapter?

That was amazing. SO so amazing.

Great character development - lets have a sequel on their honeymoon!

If I could have given 6 Stars, I would have.

I love this story and the beautiful romance it descibes in enough detail. I even had a tear or 2 myself. My partner is my sole mate, we have loved each other for nearly 40 years and been married for 32. I regret she was not my first, but almost. Keep up the great 'work'.