All Comments on 'Hero's Fall Ch. 01'

This needs to be a series.

It seems like a cool story, but it was to short to tell.

Very interesting beginning hope you will add the next chapter soon

I am glad you like this story. i understand it was a bit short, but i really had no idea how it would be received. I am not a professional by any means, so im happy i did well enough. now that i have seen there is interest i will begin the second chapter. i have no idea how long it will be, but ill do my best to make it longer this time. I look forward to hearing feedback from you again soon.

I apologize the second chapter is taking so long. Life gets in the way. i'm still working on it when i can. please be patient with me. i will get it done, i promise.