All Comments on 'Hero's Reward'

What a tremendous stiry of love and the struggles that some experience. This story was so well written I could picture each scene as they were happening. Awesome job.

Repeat reading this and not sad about that. This is a great story. 5 stars again. Well Done.

PERFECT!!!

Wonderful story. One of my favorites.

Very different very good more of a good story than just erotic

A very good love story, but hardly incest/taboo. A very well constructed and written story. Well done.

What's a good story for if you can't read and re-read it multiple times. Still as awesome as the first time.

your story was very insightful and well written .

Very sweet. 5*

Evert once in a while I happily stumble upon someone who can not only write but write so skillfully that there words take on some power and can move the reader. Thank you for being one of those all too rare writers and sharing your gift with us. Just excellent!

Bravo! Incredibly well done I was in tears several different times as I read it.

I was humbled by the compassion and love you were able to convey.

Thank you!!!

Very well! Makes me see what else you have written.

Wonderful!

10/10!!!!!

It does the heart good to see stories like this on here. Outstanding

Bloody hell that was brilliant. You have genuine talent. 5*

Wonderful story a second time as well.

Excellent story, excellent writing, by an excellent author.

Well done!

Great story! Brought tears to my eyes.

Does anyone know if this author is still with us?

Beautiful story. I really appreciate your skipping the graphic, torrid, sex out of this story;allowing it to stand on its own.

This is the 3rd time reading this story. It still brings tears to my eyes! Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

From an old man

AWESOME!!! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thankyou.

An Absolutely Brilliant love story with true passion and loving sexual relations

Awesome Brilliant most enjoyable ✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️5 Star all the way

Great, this story got me so bad, i now get weepy during television commercials...

Great story, don't know what else to say

Beautiful

WELL DONE...

...VERY well done !

A beautiful story with a well prepared plot, great characters, and best of all great lessons for life.

Just a line I once used might have added a tiny bit, though you may carry a star for life, you will make beautiful children for us to share for the rest of our lives.

With her history,I don't accept she let him shag her on their first date.

A magical piece of work that any writer would be proud to claim as their own I wish there was more to the story but do also feel that the ending was the right place to stop. Well done. Thank you.

I think it says a lot that 16 years down the road people are still commenting on this story at a rate of three or four times a week. I've read this a half dozen times, and think it's a perfect feel good story, and carries a message for people who have personally experienced such an event in their lives.

For me, I can only thank the author for sharing with us. Kudos, and if you're still out there, please consider posting more for us.

The Cinderella story really exists. 3rd reading and at some point I will be back again. Thank you.

Hooked.

Had me hooked all the way through. Please can you find me a Sarah? :) great piece of work, thoroughly enjoyed it.

I don't write often on stories but this was absolutely inspired and one of the most beautiful stories I have read and so thank you for this beautiful story

"These characters were very special to ..." all who appreciated great story telling.

Excellent!!

Thank You!!

I enjoyed your story hope that you will have a new chapter for this story some time soon thank you

2nd time I have read it and still great! Thanks, DerMTMan .

My only complaint is the timeframe. One month is way too soon for a recovery from the beating he took and for the two of them to fall in love. I don't understand why authors feel a compressed timeline is necessary when they could just as easily extend it to a more believable length without affecting their story.

great story really warmed my old heart enjoyed it so much THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!

I'm so happy I read this, it gives me hope for my future....

It was a great story and nice at the same time. Two wounded souls put together. Keep up the good work.

Fewww !!! What a beautiful story, so well built up with the ups and downs. Kept me on edge. Trauma of a victim, her inhibitions, the ultimate breakdown of them. And the final love making, it's a Poetry in motion. Thanks again for a beautiful treat.

A really good story, well written, and a pleasure to read.

Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful story, passionate, empathetic and subtly erotic, respect.

We love your characters with you! 5

A guest reader

Loved it

Another read, and I'm even more impressed, super story.

Fantastic! 5 stars.

It is always good to read this story again. You should get points for every revisit. Thank you.

Great love story.

This is a fantastic story, thank you writing it and I hope to see many more.

Sadness, hope, love, and a knight in shining armor. Nothing could be better, and you wrote a wonderful story. I have read it several times and enjoy the happiness 😊 at the end everything. Thank you.

You did a great job on the story. I'm pleased that you made a story about a true hero. That's what love is all about.

This was not a Hallmark movie...

It was waaaaayyyyyy better!

Outstanding! Keep writing...

Very well written and I feel the characters pain and love. Beautiful story. Thanks.

You’re depth of research is obvious, especially in the arts. My Sensei taught the same thing: “ Never enter a fray unless you know the outcome is in your stead. And no one knows the outcome of any combat till it is done.” Outstanding, and I will not call you Grasshopper! 5*

The author apoarantly hasn't been here for almost a decade, so no use trying to get a reaction. This is one of the most remarkable stories I've read here. Not just a great story with remarkable characters, but a great story of remarkable characters well told.. Steven will have no trouble at all upon learning of Jeff's "seduction" of his daughter Sarah. Steven will know that Jeff has saved both his daughter's from lives of unbearable misery and pain.

A killer and a victim, what's not to like. 5 Stars.

As normal in these stories, good but everything happens far too quickly.

Awesome!

I usually like to read all the comments to a story I've enjoyed, but I just can't go through eight pages. After finishing the first page though, I know there was nothing I can add that hadn't already been said. Great, brilliant, awesome, there's lots of other superlatives, but they've all been used.

It is said that the willing suspension of disbelief is necessary to enjoy any work of fiction. Well that's really not necessary here. Ok, maybe one little spot; I had to struggle a bit with Sarah giving Jeff an impromptu blow job in the hospital but, beyond that, I really don't see anything in this story that could not have happened in just the way it was described.

One commenter, a few up, said "With her history, I don't accept she let him shag her on their first date."

Sir, or madam, I think what you are overlooking here is that they have had many dates. All the time she spent with him in the hospital were dates really. I think she had to let him 'shag' her at the point she did. She has gotten to know him better, and developed feelings for him, beyond what most people experience in a lifetime. If she couldn't let him 'shag' her at this point then I feel like the story would have had to devolve into one where she is just never able to get past her fear, and who would have wanted that?

For those who complained that the story went too quickly, I'm not sure what else you would want. This story is almost 20,000 words, definitely novella length, and it runs over many weeks time. I think it covers everything that needs to be covered and in about the right level of detail. We learn enough about the characters to really care about them, but not so much that we get bored. Again, I really don't know what else you could want.

I don't know what happened to S-Des, but nothing in 10 years, it's a shame he stopped writing.

MY primary interest is femdom so I'm not quite sure what possessed me to start this story, but I'm sure glad I did. I wouldn't have wanted to miss this for the world! Five very enthusiastic stars.

Gosh, I really appreciated the way this story was built. The development of the characters and the ending. I was expecting Paige to be a celebrity the way it started off. The sex at the end was beautiful. 5/5

Absolutely brilliant, thanks and please continue. Can't wait for the next piece of brilliance from you.

I'd die for a continuation, I feel like there is a lot untold an I'd love to read more...

My second reading. Fantastic story with a very believable description of the personal reaction to a very dramatic experience for a young woman. Great psychology in my view. Thx

5*

BJ

I would for a continuation of this story. It was awesome!!!!!!

Loved it, one of my favorites

Lovely story more please

My second time viewing this story. This is definitely a chick story. It would make a cute rom-com script. However, the notion of dealing with someone who is both bull-headed and has put walls up on top of being a Mary Sue strikes me as toxic now. It's the classic "don't change queen love will find your butt."

That aside it is beautifully done. I didn't read it a second time for nothing.

Brilliant. Very professional writing

..The plot moved steadily and logically forward, and I enjoyed turning the pages to see what would happen next

..The characters were believable and each was complex and individual,--and sympathetic.

..The dialog and it narration felt natural, and intelligent without being stuffy.

..The obligatory sex scenes, which I know are almost mandatory in Literotica, fit into the sequence of the plot. I have nothing against sexual erotica as such, and the scene where the man's eyes are bandaged and he is being washed was VERY original, as was the whole bandaged eyes idea.

..I am looking forward to reading more of your to stories. There's nothing wrong with pure erotica, but it is so refreshing to read a story like this that stands on it's own two feet as a story,

You did a great job.

There’s a lot of people here who are saying they can’t wait for the authors next release but I don’t think any of you realize that they haven’t posted a story in almost 10 years. I hope they’re doing okay. I hope they’re happy, wherever they are. Such a beautiful piece of writing.

That was probably the most touching story I've ever read on here - very emotional.

Excellent piece of writing.

Well worth more than 5 Stars !

Rapier

That's a 10* for sure - out of 5, if I may say so! Sheer brilliance - and the best I have gone through on the entire site! It was the first word read, and then I just couldn't let go till I had finished it - and felt sorry that it came to an end! Keep penning more like this!

I won’t comment on your technical ability to transfer your thought to paper. The story line and characters left me so happy for them and especially for a young woman that needed to overcome her wall of emotion. You handled the characters deftly and with such care. I can appreciate that sex can be more than just the act but the emotion that brings the two together. Bravo, don’t stop writing.

One of the best stories I have read,sorry I can not put my email address as it will not recognize my email address, hope you write many more.

Such a wonderful and touching story. 10 out of 10 from me.

One of thhe best I have read!!!

I needed to say Than You. Your story really affected me. Thank you again

Second time ''ve read it. second time wiping my eyes. wonderful romance, believable characters. Sequel?

i really love the story...

Wonderful story. It left me wanting more. It definitely needs a sequel.

Eh.. sucked. Spiderman lost this time. And the descriptions of moves you learned was boring and drawn out. Most wouldn't understand the moves anyways.. then you start off your blind. I was lost after that. Story started out to much to be about you. I jumped ahead before finishing the 1st chapter just to comment.

Great story. I have read it thrice and loved it every time.

Amazing story and clever writing!

Wow, just wow! You have a very special gift. Please continue to you it to write stories that stir one’s emotions in a good way. I would love to see this story published into a book and/or made into a screenplay and then movie (with a less erotic ending) made widely available to the public. I’m sure other readers would agree with me. I think it could help individuals who have experienced similar trauma. Best of luck in all your endeavors. - Lenny

The story was ok, could have been better. You should have him end with the woman he saved from the thugs and then save her again from the experience. it. That would have been a better story. Having two different sisters being part of the main story dulled the impact of saving the girl by the older sisters story getting smeared over it . You write well but your storytelling needs work.

Wonderful on each time I read it. Pity I can't vote each time.

Wow what a storyteller Geof Archer beware

This is a 5⭐️ story ,, awesome job the only thing that is missing is an epilogue that adds to this ,, like the continuing of the romance and them getting married and having a child and a happy life together,, I guess that has to be to the readers imagination

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I have to agree with an earlier comment. The guy ends up with the wrong girl. No question.

What cracked me up was the guy apologising repeatedly for everything he did wrong before, during and after the fight. Where he fucked up during the fight was to be honest fucking everything. Your defending a helpless victim against 3 Guys you do not warn them your coming or give them a chance. I mean come on how stupid can you get your not the fucking Police required to give them Miranda rights.

You go in as hard and as viciously as possible and ideally with a fucking weapon or defensive shield. This guy was to be honest a bit of a fucking wimp during the entire story. It's fiction but as an author you can try to be too smart for your own good and in this case ultimately it's a fail🤔🤔🤔

This was a good story

@xhristianj. That's the thing bro..

Writer needed a man for Sarah with a golden heart not some meat head..

He needed to make Sarah feel safe because of her past..

So for that character building writer needs to show some things like that..

By the way great story..

I would like to thank you for your wonderful story.5stars gpa

Fabulous story. Thank you!

Great story. There are many, perhaps too many, put tab a into slot b stories here.

It’s nice to find a good character based read now and then.

Congrats for a job well done.

I agree, this is one of the best stories I have read. love the way you blended the characters together and the build-up was just right!

Well done indeed!