All Comments on 'Hero's Reward'

Just amazing. Nice character development and no retribution. Thanks for a beautiful story.

Seriously one of the best stories on here.

Touching and brilliant. An uplifting story on a platform that doesn’t often uplift. Thank you for this gem.

This was an incredible story. I gave it 5 stars. I love this the characters the build up of the characters the coincidences that happened all the things that came together so perfectly did master of job with the story. I'm glad I read it and I'll be reading more of your stuff.

There are some amazing stories on here. Several stand out. This is one of them. I want you to know that this one is in fine company.....Bandit,.. Bringing Carrie Home....Then Surely We.. ..Are just a few others.

Superb writing!!!

Too bad you can't vote more than 5 stars. This one deserves it!

Thanks

Third time reading this one. All the good things that other people have said are true. Definite 5 stars.

Well crafted, sweet story. Worth reading again.

Worth re-reading, the only disappointment comes from my inability to shoot more ***** at you for a well crafted story like this.

Every time I reread this story it is unbelievable. Such a well crafted story and it gives you such a wonderful feeling. Live it. 10 stars.

One of the best stories I’ve read, and I read it at least a couple of times each year. Thank you.

Wonderful story.Meant alot to me.My husband was in a bad car wreck.Shattered his T11 vertibre.Was in a coma for a week.After surgery Doctor said their was a chance of paralysis to his lower extremities.Wouldn't know till

he was brought out of his induced coma.

Thankfully when he came too he had feeling in his legs.The rehab began

and was told three to six months.

The nurses gave him sponge baths.

He was worried because he hadn't had a

erection.Have too admit this concerned me as well.Doctor had said their was a possibility of sexual dysfunction.

I spoke to the nurse and asked if I could

start bathing him.At first their was no reaction we were both nervous.I could feel him so tense.Told him to relax.I decided the best thing was not just bathe but to tease his flaccid cock.

I started gently stroking and licking the length.Glory be he responded.Suffice

it to say it meant so much to both of us.

He had a full recovery and was released from rehab in four weeks.I think it helped that I gave him his nightly sponge baths😊

Once again I have let my emotions get to me as I read this story. It keeps getting better each time I read it. Thanks for taking the time to write something that can really touch the reader.

Thank you, again.

Munchie184

out standing.. look forward to reading more of your work..k

Good story, inner beauty is all that counts. Of cos with some outstanding attributes on the outside made it all the more better.

Great and gentle writing.

What a wonderful story.

Great story, masterful.

Delightful! Very tender feelings expressed so well. I loved this story.

Wonderful story! I enjoyed it immensely; and the people seemed quite real.

Great story BUT I was hoping he’d be with Paige

I don't usually read romance stories, but will have to revise my thinking after this. It has left me with a wonderful warm glow, I loved every word. It was so well written, a subject so well handled. I must read more by this author 5* I think there should have been an epilogue, saying how their love played out.

I have no idea why, but I am banned from thanking them direct, I have never written anything but constructive criticism or praise, but still I am banned from contacting anyone directly.

I've read this more than once and loved it more every time. You should get an agent and get paid for your riveting!

nearly perfect, but he ended up with the wrong girl.

This was awesome. Sarah was a deeply troubled woman. Jeff handled her perfectly.

A good stick man can get a lot done. R. H.

Best story ever!

A well told story! The main characters are described with compassion! The comments about wishing the MC ending up with Paige missed the whole point of the story! 5*

Dobbin55

This story was spectacular. It had me crying so much that I ran out of Kleenex so thank heaven for 🧻!

Good on you for taking such care with this subject. Coping with trauma can be debilitating for some people but sometimes if you’re lucky you can heal. Look at all those years of suffering and self doubt it took for Sarah. Jeff is truly the hero here in more ways than one. Such a sweet hopeful story thanks for sharing.

Great, great story. Well written. Have you ever tried writing a book? I think if you do it definitely get published.

This was a great story, although I kind of figured that Sarah was going to have some kind of terrible scar when you blinded the main character. What would have made a great twist is that Sarah didn't have a scar because the doctors had fixed it, but in her mind whenever she looked at herself she would see the scar on her face. But this was a great story. I enjoyed reading it

Odd twist to this story usually it is the victim who was saved who falls for the hero. It could have been even better if the hero helped the victim deal with a scare from being attacked who he saved after. But it was a decent story even though it had a weird twist that made made me almost stop reading.

This story never gets old. No matter how many times I read it, I love it more each time. Thank you writing a real classic.

Outstanding characters and story line. 5+++

Supremely excellent. Very well crafting of emotions. Well told. Thank-you. 5***+

This was one of the most awkward stories I've read on here. Yes, I know Sarah's a victim of trauma, but she did nothing but continue to send Jeff mixed signals.

Oh my, I wish I had written this!!! F A N T A S T I C ! I really loved it! The love scene was done with such reverence...Thank you for sharing this love story.

Both versions are great

Des héros comme ça

Sa ne cours plus Les rues de nos jours

Merci pour la belle histoire

Bonne continuation

This is an incredibly beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Nice story.

My,second reading, still loved it so much, again it left me with a warm glow. Lovely characters everyone.

Lovely story. Well worth the five stars.

JPB

My 2nd read. 5 stars again. I notice you haven’t posted anything since 2012. I sincerely hope that you are doing well.

Wonderful story with kindness, hope, love and respect. One to read many times!

Nasty subject handled extremely well.relly enjoyed this story

Absolutely wonderful story. 5 Stars all the way.

Excellent story and great ending. I know it's not typical story but it gives hope that everyone can find love. Keep writing such wonderful and emotional stories

Noice. 5/5* Fav

came back and read this again.

wish there was a bit more about the transformation of the two, showing their lives going on.

What a wonderfully well written story!

This felt real in all the best possible ways.

This story will take a reader on an emotional roller coaster and leave them rung out . 5 stars does not even begin to touch it. I have read this yearly, at least since I found it. It always seems to get a little bit better than the previous read. Thank you, again for your efforts at entertaining us, the readers.

Munchie184

Really enjoyed the read.

Very well done!!

Loved it!

This is the only literotica-story I've ever read more than once, and it just keeps getting better. You make us extremely fond of both your main characters. And Paige. Simply amazing!

In a proper society, he would have just walked up, pulled his gun, and executed the criminals!

ZK

Revisit after a long while, still as good as I remember.

Read this great story several times. I find new little details each time that make me be in awe of the author's skill. Captivating story with complex interesting characters. Thanks for the share. John.

What a wonderful, fantastic story. Beautifully written. Keep writing great stories like this.

Thank you. This story shifted things in me I didn’t know needed it. Thank you.

I have been reading stories on Literotica for many years, and, for me, this is now my most favorite ever!

Thank you so much for such a great story!

I can't remember how many times I've read this story. It literally makes my heart lighter, just so uplifting. Just an incredible read. 5 stars again. Thanks for sharing

The author has mastered the craft of storytelling. We come to this site for erotic inspiration, but this writing is deeper than just titulation, erotic sexuality. Much deeper and insightful.

I'm feeling cheap now. I can't award this what it deserves. 5 stars are not enough not even in the ball park. Am also feeling very emotional too. This has touched me on a very personal level and reminds me of something that happened in my life many years ago. I've been reading on here for a while and thinking about submitting a story or two and you might have just helped me be brave enough to do that. Thank you for this excellent narrative. BardnotBard.

Second time to read this story. Still 5 stars!

The story, it seems that you have at least felt these emotions as well. I have been a kid afraid of shadows, Navy, scared and then in charge of divisions, disable retired, worked in shipyards leading repair gangs then a LEO riding solo in charge of minor areas, retired, tired of being shot at. Was mostly alone and when did find someone, they usually left when tried to move forward. Being alone, once you are in charge is easy if you maintain that "in charge" distance. And pain only hurts if you let it. I have learned several things:

Being alone is all in the mind;

Pain is an old friend who is always there;

Trust is a very rare item;

Loyalty does exist, in very small doses;

Damage is easy to do, difficult to control;

Invisability is an aquired skill that I'm very good at;

Social skills go away if you have the above traits / skills.

This story is very well done. It shows courage, care for other than ones self, love, and mostly trust. I read it more than once. I can only wish it would have been mine.

Thank you for sharing this part of yourself.

Be Safe

Don Quixote and Esmeralda and with no Sancho Panza in sight.

[31.08.23]

Top Shelf Story!

Looove the Sam Kinison love!

Sam was such a great comedian, with his (ex)preacher delivery and routines. I used to love listening to him on the Howard Stern Show and was listening the morning his brother Bill called in after Sam had been killed driving to Laughlin (Nevada) with his brand new bride...very moving.

11/10!!!!!

Excellent story I couldn’t stop reading once I started

Sometimes I just have to get away from all the current LW Drivel, so I escape to the Classics. Like Hero's Reward. Five stars, of course.

JPB

Among all the books and stories one goes through, once in a while comes a gem like this. This story reminded me of my wife, who was a very timid and frightened woman when I first met her because of the traumatic childhood she had had. I could completely identify with this story. It took a lot of time, a lot of patience, a lot of loving to be able to make her open up. Thank God it's been 15 years that we are married now. She is much more confident and outgoing today. She has to be. She needs to look after and control 3 kids, as she says-our son, daughter and lastly me.

A beautiful story, i'm jealous of such a deep resounding love.

10/10

Will read start to finish a lot. Thank you.

Beautiful. Second read. Five stars (of course).

Outstanding!

Fabulous story, unable to stop when I started. Easy 5*, such a beautiful story of love and overcoming adversity.

Just as good as the first time I read this.

I don't think that 'perfect' is too high praise for this.

Worth far more than 5 Stars.

Thanks for sharing.

Rapier

From fear to tears to happiness, what a beautiful story!

A 2 tissue story. Excellent. 10 stars.

THANK YOU !

Scott

I greatly appreciate the time you spent on developing the back story and the sex scenes were wonderfully and tasteful done so enjoyed slowly enjoying the developmt beautifully written dealing probing really sensitive issues

I might be a romantic sort of person at stage of life where it v unlikely anything like this could happen

profound effect

I love this story! I have read it at least 3 times, and I'll continue to read it when I need a shot of romance.

Oh, WRITER ! Today is THANKSGIVING. I am enjoying my morning COFFEE and a delicious PUMPKIN MUFFIN. These characters, this story are just the most perfect way to start the day that honors THANKFULNESS. THANK YOU ! Of course, 5 stars !

One of the best.

Excellent !

You did a GREAT Job, writing this !

THANK YOU !

Scott

Excellent. Well written and a very enjoyable read.

Very nice!

Absolutely the best thing I’ve read in years. The way you let the characters develop before they jump into bed made it so memorable. Please, more. If you haven’t already written a book, you

should. Excellent pace, kept my interest the whole time. Thank you.

Well done!

So much to say about this story, where do I begin?

Well firstly, I'll start by saying this one really twisted the knife in the heart for me. I struggle to think of anything lower and more despicable than rape, especially to some high school virgin girl with her whole life ahead of her. Then, as if it isn't already unthinkably terrible enough, to cut her face afterwards... if there is a place such as Hell, even the darkest corners of it would be too good for monsters that would commit such unconscionable acts. The maelstrom of emotion that stirred when her past was revealed - anger, sadness, pity, to name but a few - made it difficult to hold back some tears. And I thought it was going to be a nice, sweet story after he saved that girl from being raped. Bastard baited me in for that one.

I thought he was going to get Paige early on, but I'm guessing she decided that he was a better match for her sister. I wonder if she wanted him for herself and made a sacrifice. I wonder if there is threesome action in Jeff's future. Hey, stranger things have happened.

The fight scene in the alley at the start was really well done. Got my adrenaline going and my anxiety up. That's rare but I know I'm reading a good story when that happens.

Anyway, long story short: a great story, full of emotional moments and tender love. If this was a film, I'm sure I would cry and be really angry and all worked up. Good job with this.

Absolutamente fantástico.

I agree, these characters are special. Thank you for sharing them.

Wonderful story. Makes me want an epilog though. Thank you.

Excellent. Realistic, good character growth. Love a happy ending.

Amazing story! So we’ll written

I am in awe at this story. I didn’t get to read the first this time it came out. This revision is fantastic. The fight scene at the beginning was very believable. I even got my adrenaline flowing. The only worry was if the police showed up in time.

Sarah as an aide was just great until she thought Jeff would be able to see her late in his recovery. Then the two fell in love. And Sarah fights for mental stability. As the song says…. Love will find a way.

Take care.

Excellent. Thank you.

My second time through this one, Love it! I don't know if you still read comments but Thank You!

This was absolutely amazing, and so beautiful. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.