by Senoritadelanieve
The chemistry between the two main characters is wonderfully soothing. In the midst of tragedy, i never cease to be amazed at the passion and/or compassion the rises up to meet us. I don't begin to understand it but....it's so very real. You've captured a bit of it.
thanks for sharing.... i hope you are moved to finish this story....
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The only bad part of this story is that it was left on a non-cliff cliff hanger.
It's too bad this was left unfinished. It was a good story. I want to see Alli's ex boyfriend get what's coming to him but its been five years and I don't think we'll ever get to find out.
They should have called the cops on the bastard the first time!
No one should tolerate that kind of violence male or female!
If they do it once they WILL do it again...probably worse!
I don't give a shit if it ain't pc but while some males will, a real MAN does not hit a woman EVER!!
Granted not a cliff hanger as such but I want the bastard to get his!
Also would like to see the relationship develop.
This story has legs yet!