All Comments on 'Hidden Feelings Ch. 02'

by Senoritadelanieve

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jeesseejeesseeover 12 years ago
continue please

this is great cant wait to finish it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice

Good story, please contine.

Qui3t0n3Qui3t0n3over 12 years ago
Feeln

U should continue it's good so far

RebecaSRebecaSabout 12 years ago

Amazing story, you really have some talent there. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very good so far!

Please continue this story! Don't leave us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
So Good

The chemistry between the two main characters is wonderfully soothing. In the midst of tragedy, i never cease to be amazed at the passion and/or compassion the rises up to meet us. I don't begin to understand it but....it's so very real. You've captured a bit of it.

thanks for sharing.... i hope you are moved to finish this story....

-smile

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
ugh...

The only bad part of this story is that it was left on a non-cliff cliff hanger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

It's too bad this was left unfinished. It was a good story. I want to see Alli's ex boyfriend get what's coming to him but its been five years and I don't think we'll ever get to find out.

ukdukeukdukeover 6 years ago
A delightful love story but what a beautiful of an ex!

They should have called the cops on the bastard the first time!

No one should tolerate that kind of violence male or female!

If they do it once they WILL do it again...probably worse!

I don't give a shit if it ain't pc but while some males will, a real MAN does not hit a woman EVER!!

Granted not a cliff hanger as such but I want the bastard to get his!

Also would like to see the relationship develop.

This story has legs yet!

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