All Comments on 'Hidden Thoughts'

Quite a good story. Just a shame about all the typos and assorted gaffs.

"Adam hoped it would be Paul but he knew that was a stupid fantasy."

I was looking for a good brother/sister story but the setup and back story on page one completely turned me off to it. Who wants to listen to there sister getting fucked? She's written as a complete slut and whore and no TRUE man wants ANY woman like that. Not worth the time. 1*

A couple of whores and a seedy pedo rapist. 1/5

Wow. Well, they tell you that if you have nothing good to say...

Honestly I enjoyed the story. It was far different from the standard sibling story. An interesting story with some hot scenes. Would love to see more or even a spin off of Paula. 4.5 Stars plus you got yourself a new follower!