by RiteofSpring
Turn-off. We just had a cult operating in Canada, the US, and Mexico that featured forced branding. Are you supporting that? That's what I thought about when I read your story. Not a turn-on.
It was nothing but violence and hurting the woman. News flash: hurting a woman when she doesn't want it isn't sexy, your story is messed up.
Too much sharing of the women , you need to find something to write about, your a good writer but wonder if you so easily share your woman or if your woman so easily shares her self with others ,