All Comments on 'Hide and Seek Pt. 04'

Different but very enjoyable. I wonder where you will take us next!

Sarah, Shara, quite contrary how does your garden (er) grow. With hairless balls and pretty cocks all in a row.

I can hear it all ready, leave the writing to a writer.

I thought Shara might be standing in the doorway.

Matthew, is so gonna get busted one of these days, for his sake it better be his hand, not his teen neighbor.

Great story so far but this section is not needed. Women are not like men at all it's a shame

Max! Every time you put digit to keyboard you are able to produce something different something unique sadly not always fabulous but always different. This one I was a bit confused by at times sadly, got mixed up with the fantasy and the fabled characters fantasy don't know if that's clear but don't know how else to put it. I just hope Matthew comes to his senses before doing irreparable damage to his marriage and commensurate damage to his relationships with his relationships that occurred from that marriage. On the other hand he does seem to be enjoying his new friends enormously.