All Comments on 'Hierarchy of Needs Ch. 03'

Excellent story, I appreciate that you were able to end it on a high note! So few serialized stories on this site ever get a proper ending, let alone the one you wrote.

I read this from chapter 1 to 3 so i can say with full honesty that this is a gem that needs to be mined out of it's cave! Its one of the best stories i have read in almost a year! Me personally i prefer incest love stories i was still hooked from the beginning! Sure the beginning is slow, it still build and accomplished what it was going for! Making his older sister his obedient sex slave!

On a scale of 1-5 i give this a 5! Long, well typed, fulfilling story with a slow but very satisfying end!

My own little note here : i hope you make a incest love story with a younger brother and older sister!

Thank you for another wonderful story (Please finish limits at some point!)

You write exactly what I'm looking for that I find missing in other incest stories on this site.

I can't get into a lot of other stories in a similar vein because.. incest is taboo, but its hardly treated as such enough in those stories, siblings accept fucking each other like its just a slightly awkward barrier, or there's mind control stories where its boom ur hypnotised, now we fuck.

You understand that corruption and slowly chipping away at the taboo is a much more.. grounded? Take on the concept, and as such I enjoy your stories as a league of their own.

Thank you!

(Also please include more impreg at the end of stories.. personal request)

Perfect, just perfect

Absolutely wonderful read. Got a little wordy in places, but a true gem.

Amazing writing, well done! The goal was clear here and you achieved it and then some, and you clearly have a knack for the long form format (although this might have been a bit oversized for my liking, I do personally tend to prefer shorter content)

There were a couple of typos (if you ever want a fellow EMC author's editing or feedback, consider my hand up!) and some slight plot points that personally stuck with me (no exposition on the origin of the room, no mention of changed priorities after achieving "Sex with Ashley" - I'd have liked to see him, in the prologue, go into the room to see, perhaps, "Sex with My Sex Slave Ashley" or "Dominate my Sex Slave Sister", as well as "Enjoy and Be Happy with my Sex Slave Sister" or something similar have replaced Sex with Ashley now that that had been achieved - indeed, long before the ultimate conclusion) but these were by no means deal-breakers for me.

If I were to add anything, it would be a prologue some six months to a year or so later, where we return to see Jacob now living in a nice place with Ashley ever at his side, perhaps with some additions like piercings or tattoos (demeaning, of course, perhaps a womb tattoo or some "cum here" arrows) in which we see Jacob grow curious about the room to discover what his--and Ashley's--priorities have become. I'd have him go home only to find no room where it once was; confused and a little worried, he returns home to his slave, and is in the process of slamming her down on the couch when he notices a door in the old brick wall, like a wine cellar. Surprised he hadn't remembered it and not remembering it being on the sales plans, he quickly unloads into his slave and checks the door, to find it leading down a short flight of stairs to a tiny, windowless room... Where two solitary cabinets stand. (To me, this indicates some inexplicable attribute that follows Jacob around, allowing him this inexplicable control over his household. We can speculate on whether this is magical, perhaps some genetic or familial curse or power, or just an "all in his head" projection.)

Ultimately this was a fantastic story, and as someone generally not into incest or longer form content, this still gets full marks from me - the concept, dedicated slow burn, sexy interactions and ultimate, complete satisfaction of achieving everything it set out to do were stellar (and I will readily admit, had me finishing twice in a session, something rare for me!)

Applause from me and keen to read the next one!

Noice

Story should've been called "She Wanted. No, She Needed".