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by PaulaApril

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love your style and pacing. This was a beautifully structured story, but your dialog is confusing the way it’s rendered here, with line breaks within the quotes.

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userPaulaApril@PaulaApril
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Amateur author of erotica. My stories are sometimes an outlet for my deviant or bi-curious thoughts that I'm too nervous to try in real life. May be one day. Some collections and longer works are available on Amazon Kindle for anyone who wants to add my work to their library.