All Comments on 'High School Bully'

by IllyHymen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Super sexy

ForTheLoveOfFemdomForTheLoveOfFemdomalmost 4 years ago
Great start

I enjoyed this story a lot. My only criticism is that it could have been slightly slower placed and a bit more descriptive as to what was going on in Emily's head, and how she felt when Jada was dominating her. But overall I loved the story. Jada seemed so powerful and in control and it seems like Emily was her perfect Mark as a weaker, fearful and submissive target. I'm hoping for a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Short but good

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Definitely a good start I would love to read more maybe some spanking and out side use maybe taking her home to clean mistress house nude ofcourse make her dress as she wants no more underwear and must have short dresses on humility her more in front of her friends!

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLover 1 year ago

Call the cops and have the rapist bitch arrested

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Will u be ever continuing this if not would u be willing to let someone carry on

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Seems rushed you could have taken your time

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Awesome

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

To short

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Illy Hymen is the author of The Little Goblin Girl and The Storm Mage, both of which are currently available on Amazon. She works professionally as a ghostwriter and editor when guys aren't paying her to beat them up. https://www.amazon.com/Illy-Hymen/e/B07MHWP434 She has wr...