by IllyHymen
I enjoyed this story a lot. My only criticism is that it could have been slightly slower placed and a bit more descriptive as to what was going on in Emily's head, and how she felt when Jada was dominating her. But overall I loved the story. Jada seemed so powerful and in control and it seems like Emily was her perfect Mark as a weaker, fearful and submissive target. I'm hoping for a part 2!
Definitely a good start I would love to read more maybe some spanking and out side use maybe taking her home to clean mistress house nude ofcourse make her dress as she wants no more underwear and must have short dresses on humility her more in front of her friends!
Will u be ever continuing this if not would u be willing to let someone carry on