by Darkhime
I'm very interested in where this is going! Can't wait for next chapter !!
I love the writing. It flows. This is very refreshing since a lot of the content on this site sound like they were written by grade schoolers. I love how you are descriptive without it being awkward or annoying. You really put us, the readers on a clift hanger and I love it. It was done right without being obnoxious because it is plausible. Can't wait to see the next edition
I like how both Nickolas and Skye come across as real, 3-dimensional people. Nickolas is an interesting bully, as he's a football hero, but clearly a cad towards women. And yet they find him so attractive! I think Nickolas is already planning ahead to bedding Skye. Looking forward to their continuing story!
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"the more information you have the more powerful you are."
"balls deep in Stephanie, the head cheerleader, or was it Stacey. Nickolas hadn't bothered remembering her name."
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This is one of my favourite series. The way you have developed your writing is amazing!