All Comments on 'High School Never Ends Ch. 01'

by Darkhime

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minxxxkittenminxxxkittenover 8 years ago
Intrigued!

I'm very interested in where this is going! Can't wait for next chapter !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That was well written.

A higher level of skill than average.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
yes

I loved it! Can't wait till the next chapter, and the ones after!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The Writing Is Wonderful

I love the writing. It flows. This is very refreshing since a lot of the content on this site sound like they were written by grade schoolers. I love how you are descriptive without it being awkward or annoying. You really put us, the readers on a clift hanger and I love it. It was done right without being obnoxious because it is plausible. Can't wait to see the next edition

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I am excited to see where this story goes. I hope it gets longer .

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very intriguing, engaging start

I like how both Nickolas and Skye come across as real, 3-dimensional people. Nickolas is an interesting bully, as he's a football hero, but clearly a cad towards women. And yet they find him so attractive! I think Nickolas is already planning ahead to bedding Skye. Looking forward to their continuing story!

luv2read2

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I gave it four stars. ...

... Intriguing start. Panther fan.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaalmost 7 years ago
Yes ma'am...

I am liking this already!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

"the more information you have the more powerful you are."

"balls deep in Stephanie, the head cheerleader, or was it Stacey. Nickolas hadn't bothered remembering her name."

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing

This is one of my favourite series. The way you have developed your writing is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This has the beginnings of epic hotness. I am hooked!

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