All Comments on 'High School Senior Class Trip Ch. 09'

Had so much hope for this story. Vanilla at best. Need to work on putting some flair in your story and more than one page would be nice. You left a lot of loose ends

I'll say there were loose ends! You never explained about the 'bee stings' and who administered them, and just what sort of tranquilizer repeatedly entered the students bodies. Not to mention exactly why they were all knocked out. And the teachers...it would seem the controller's knew the students would slip their teachers a 'micky-finn', but how do they know, unless maybe the controller's wanted the teachers for themselves..? But I degrees. Overall, an interesting ride, with an unsatisfying ending.

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