All Comments on 'Higher Education Ch. 02'

It's fine standing alone as a chapter 2. The build-up is slow in most of the really good stories. The prim and proper heroine should be well established early on and you're doing that. Having amazing sex early on usually spoils the story. Just keep going. Remember to outline the whole story first and then outline each chapter as you get to it. Make the difficult organization sequence decisions before writing so you don't regret leaving something out of an earlier chapter. And if you do leave something out, don't worry about it. Plug it in as a memory or something. If you don't admit to it, very few people will notice on their own. After outlining, write the dialogue first, then expand on the descriptive detail. It takes longer but results in more believable (and hot) conversations.

@Anonymous: Thank you for the helpful and thoughtful feedback.

Building beautifuly 5*s so far.