All Comments on 'Highland Pack Ch. 06'

You have a wealth of interesting stories you are trying to tell. The best way to tell them, IMHO, would be to make them part of a book because then you would have enough commitment from your readers to give them sufficient development and details to do them justice. Failing that, you might want to spend more time and words but tell fewer stories.

As it is, you move from one story to another without developing characterization or fleshing out the background and action with details. Sometimes, this leaves the reader in confusion.

Keep working on it, and good luck.

Thank you for this chapter, Iread2relax... Merry Christmas to you and yours. :)