by afrohair
Omg! When you told me you were going to do something in this story, I never imagined this! Holy crap, what just happened???
I know you’re building up the drama, but why would the nurse (if she is the one Darrell was having an affair with) call Darrell to come to his wife‘s bedside?
And why would Darell act so hurt if he was leaving her? Plausibility is sinking...
What was that ? Damn that wasn't a plot twist that was I don't know what that was wow!
You told me you were going to do something that would make your readers mad at you. Looks like you did that! I'm still confused, like... what the hell???
Still waiting on an update to see if you're gonna fix this somehow. I can't even bring myself to read it again unless this is redeemed in some way.
I can’t wait to read what happens next! The suspense is killing me!
Well that came out of nowhere! I hope there's an explanation coming of why he chose that path.