All Comments on 'Hiring an Escort for Valentine’s Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very funny

Very good story keeping us in the dark until he shows up after her keynote talk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Needs to be more explicit

I enjoyed the premise of the story. I wish you had been more descriptive during the sex scenes.

maddictmaddictabout 7 years ago
Her connection was perfect, Tim

Very entertaining, one of lifes delicacies

VirgoPiscesVirgoPiscesabout 7 years ago
It was a good read but...

It was a good read and I really enjoyed the detail you put into it but I did happen to find it sort of predictable, now that may just be me, other readers probably feel different so I encourage you to continue writing

PabloPaco2022PabloPaco2022over 1 year ago

The story did not do this site any justice in as much it had no erotic sensuality describing feelings of excitement and anticipation. The actual sex scenes remained bland and so everyday normal it could have been a description of the conference coffee break.

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