All Comments on 'His Best Friend'

Gave up midway with your seemingly-forever sentences & misspelling of "waving".

Most enjoyable, you certainly have a way with words, I look forward to reading more of your fantasies , thanks

Beautiful story. Wonderful read.

Great story and well written, you should have submitted this for an increase in your GCSE grade 😊. Many thanks for submitting, keep up the writing.

Good premise.

Sex really rushed, though.

No verbal interplay during it, just zooming ahead.

No one says anything to the other about how good what's being done to him/her feels.

No one asks if the other likes what's being dont to him/her.

No one tells the other to do something more/different.

No one asks for more of something.

He doesn't tell her she's a dirty/girl and needs to be spanked befor spanking ensues.

Four stars.

Another FABULOUS story and fantasy.

Absolutely loved it. XXX

Loved the build up and release of tension and suspense. Well done!