All Comments on 'His Ch. 02'

Thanks for the second chapter of this story; once again you have captured the essence of submissive feeling and experience with an impressive writing talent. Again, there are errors that detract from the plot and flow of the narrative, but your writing is engaging to read.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

(like the odd confusion of tense) do not detract from the terse quality of your writing. A sweet insight into a truly sub mind. Thank you.