All Comments on 'His Daughters Make a Foursome'

Love your work, this one included, but there were a few name changes that were confusing. 1.) After Janet blew Calvin, "Clarissa and I managed to compose ourselves..." and 2.) ""Touch it Clarissa," Jewel commanded". Who was Jewel supposed to be? Overall, great story, as always. Keep it up.

~sigh~ In one of the stories that inspired this one, Jewel was the name of one of the characters. I based Janet on her, although the relationship to Calvin is not the same. I goofed. I will likely submit the edited version later and I thank you for spotting that. My brain must've been working wonky that day, some days, a lot of writing leads to tiny blips.

Love the story and how it was written. Love the intensity of it.

... aber echt geil.

Excellent and hot. I did not care about the confusion on the names. So many writers who are prolific make mistakes like that.

Liked it. A few mistakes but damn it was hot. Needed a bit more hesitation between family members and more descriptive during the sex but it was good.