by thereshegoes123
This may make for a great adult cartoon, but I can't accurately visualize these characters. They seem so ridiculous and unrealistically bigoted, it immediately breaks the immersion. I was kinda on board until you described how James has an ass so fat that you can hear it throughout the neighborhood while he walks? And all the female characters are cartoonishly mean and controlling? I just can picture any of this in reality ... So like I said, nice adult cartoon, use pictures next time.
Loved it! It's so rare to find a story that makes me laugh and cum, but this definitely did it. Sheila's prison yard instincts and his butt clapping performance had me on edge the whole time. The end scenes were so satisfying! Thanks very much, and can't wait till your next work
I love this author's stories but I couldn't get past the 2nd page on this one. The "ass clapping while walking" descriptions were so ridiculous I couldn't keep up. And when the futas are described in a way that all I can imagine them as are men, it breaks it for me. I'll look forward to other stories though.
Shit how about just kill the kid next there wasn’t any hint of him giving consent I swear some of u will use “fantasy” as an excuse to write out all the sick shit that goes on in your head
sorry man but this novel is one of the worst i have ever read, truly a piece of shit, but perhaps if you dedicate yourself to fishing you will be able to find something that you truly have some talent
This is ridiculously hot. You have to do a continuation. Just wish there was a little more romance between the two. They are family after all, they should be closer. Maybe Sheila even finds herself falling hard for him and letting him play with her or even topping her perfect ass. Yes, I know that makes no sense for a power top and sub bottom, but that would be so hot and intimate. And May can have some fun too.
This is so insane and ridiculous but at the same time incredibly hot. Loved it and hope poor James has to stay with his Aunt for some more masculinity training.
Awesome story!!!! Well done!!! We rwally do need a next part to this. Maybe James moves in with Auntie Sheila? She could teach him a lot things ;-) Great work!!!!!