All Comments on 'His Girl'

This a nice start to what I think and hope to be a very good series. But, Hmmmph *pouts* you left me on a cliff hanger, meanie (stated in the cutest voice I can muster). TT

Please update soon!

It’s like everything I ever heard about 50 Shades of Grey, creepy abusive arsehole stalker and rapist. She needs to run, fast to the police.

I enjoy reluctance stories immensely but I’m desperately trying to give them up because the category is sadly paired with Non Con which is naturally overflowing with rape stories.

Call me old fashioned, rape isn’t my thing. Yes 🙄 I do know it’s a fantasy story but frankly to me this sounds like a sexed up version of an everyday police report, even if it is a damned good police report it’s very well written.

Sorry I know that must sound offensive, your writing style isn’t an issue because you’re obviously a gifted writer it’s just the content I’m having problems with. In the grand scheme of things I’m just one voice out many there will undoubtedly be many more people who love this kind of story.

well till now he is quite a hot walking dream for any chick

hope he aint into an sadism or fisting or clamps it reduces the the pleasure

more please!!!!