All Comments on 'His Kitten Again 01'

I hope you write another chapter

Great first story, looking forward to the next ;)

Great beginning, ssg. You develop characters very well and the story setup is interesting. Looking forward to more.

I hope you continue the story. I look forward to reading many more from you

... to reading a new author's submission and this was an example of a very good one. You have given us a marvellous first chapter and, if it is your first attempt at this kind of writing, I think we have a considerable new talent in our midst.

Thank you for sharing your work with us and please bring us more of it. Five stars, well done and welcome!

I loved this story.

Well written, great plot.

I cannot wait for the next one.

Keep up the good work.

Oh wow! Thank you all so very much for your kind and helpful words. I was incredibly nervous when I first posted this, fearing that I would get a negative reaction. I submitted chapter two right after chapter one, so it should be up soon, but I was waiting to submit chapter three until I saw the kind of reception this one got. I'll submit it as soon as I can :)

Thank you again so very much, and I hope that you'll continue with me, and Emma and Alex, through this series :)

~shysubmissivegirl~

Welcome to the Lit Authors! You have a great start here, although I was cringing at how totally abusive her Master is. He makes Jake in WIA look like a choir boy! I sure hope Alex is gonna set him straight. Glad to see a new author here with fresh material and will look forward to your next installment.

~LB

it was a very good beginning to a story! pls continue I wanna hear more!

Lol ur right lb I thought that myself he's way worse. Great start can't wait for more. Another fav to go on my list.

This is a great story! I can't wait to read more!

Okay! Wow! I'm a bit overwhelmed by all the attention this story is receiving, but I'm so very glad that the comments have been so positive and helpful! Unfortunately, I submitted Ch 02 before I was able to get some helpful tips, so some changes won't be made until Ch 03. Please stick in there! I promise they'll be made :)

I also just submitted Ch 03, so hopefully that will be up before too long!

Thanks again for all of your comments and uplifting words. They're so beyond encouraging, and I couldn't describe the rush I get from reading each one if I had all the time in the world!

Please please please keep it up guys! It means the world to me!

~shysubmissivegirl~

Powerful start, It made me almost frightened to read on. What a bastard, I hope Emma finds happiness. Love your style of writing, welcome to Lit. Thanks. M.

As has just been said, a very powerful start.

There are benefits to being late to the party and the first is that I can read this in a oner.

5/5

Wonderful story <3