All Comments on 'His Obsession'

by Fluffy07

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honeybreehoneybreealmost 12 years ago
more please!

I want to see where this goes because in the game of "obsession" it isn't always pretty

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Continue please!

Ooo more more! I can just see the wild times that may come in the future for these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

good thing in this world sexual harassment doesnt exist. no flirting or seduction required just gtab her and bend her over the desk like this is still 1800's

MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyalmost 12 years ago
Great First Chapter

I don't see how he's obsessed. I was thinking he was stalking her or being a little to possessive or something on a more dangerous kind of level. But it was well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hhmm,

I might just be paranoid, but I swear that I have read this story or something similar to it before because I recognize Alexander's last name. Is this a remake or am I just wrong and going crazy?

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertalmost 12 years ago

People this is fantasy chill out. There was no disclaimer saying that following is an excerpt of real life. I for one, am intrigued looking forward to reading more.

StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsalmost 12 years ago
Love it

Can't wait to read more

Gabrielle1986Gabrielle1986almost 12 years ago
hottttttt

pleaseeeeeeeee update!!! hot start!

juicycarameljuicycaramelalmost 12 years ago
Nice!

Sexy start, all i can say is MORE...please :o)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Me likey!!!

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101almost 12 years ago
Omg this was wonderful!

Brilliantly written and really, really hot. Woo! *Fans myself* Hahaha, good job!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmalmost 12 years ago
Watching this one

This is loaded for bear...... Can't wait to see where it goes!!!!!

Good one, yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh baby!!

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOalmost 12 years ago
*****

Yep I'll be watching out for this one to.

AuraOfBeautyAuraOfBeautyalmost 12 years ago
Coincidence!

Your story is off to a fantastic start and it is such a coincidence that not only is my first name Miranda as well but, my aunt's name is Lisa and Alexander is my last name. However, outside of the bizarre concurrency, I really look forward to the continuance of this story. It's going to be a good one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
mmm

This is off to a very good start! I hate the chapter was so short. I want some background on Alexander and some teasing from Miranda Excellent writing I love it!

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