All Comments on 'His Office Kitten Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is excellent story, but too short. It needs a more extensive introduction and build-up. The love scene is well done, but is also too short. The same is true for the ending- unless, of course, another chapter is in the works.

LostBabygirl3489LostBabygirl3489over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. It's part 2.

doowopdoowopdoowopdoowopover 1 year ago

"... so cute and naughty. The perfect combination."

Love this new part

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