All Comments on 'His Sister's Slave Ch. 03'

Not sure why this is taking three chapters to get going. I like the buildup, but it would be good to get to some sex already!

Was hoping for something by now. But it is going to end up some bull shit drawn out cuk shit.

Come on! Three chapters and still nothing.

Looking forward to where this is going.

Genuinely nice and good story, but it takes too long, you could put the three first chapters in one.

I am not sure if I will keep reading if it is little chapters like this all along

A very good start to a promising story. Any chance you'll make more? What kind of stuff will be happening in the future?

This needs some serious editing. It's too slow, and the characters aren't that well defined. There is no sexual tension between anyone. Don't get me wrong, it's a good first try, but it really needs some work.

loved the story, felt the story line should move a long a little faster, with more teasing.

Good start!!!!! Love to see what happens next!!!!!